Sunday, February 12, 2006

I stood at the balcony sipping a cup of coffee , looking at a child playing with her plastic football. The unfinished concrete floor she was trotting on barely seemed to bite her naked feet. Or even if it did, she din't seem to care. Every moment she spent seemed to be moments of unadultered joy, of consummate innocence. One second Time seemed to fly by, another second i looked at her and Time seemed to stop by and join me in the audience , to watch something as pure as that. Maybe the floor was watching too and enjoying the touch of her cushy feet and in the indulgence had forgotten it's prick.
Her grandfather was watering the plants in a small garden surrounding the apartment. The gush of water, from whatever space was left between his thumb and the tip of the pipe, seemed to be as welcome for the plants as for the water escaping the pipe. He seemed to establish some sort of connection with the plants through the water, a smile that would'nt leave his face. A smile which suggested contentment at the way life treated him. At the way all the events leading to his retirement lined up
to salute him. The smile of an old man content with life can easily be confused with the smile of one prepared for the eventual, I thought. What could possibly defeat such a man? The smile had to be there.
The water trickled down from the leaves to the concrete floor and formed a neat stream. The sun glistened its edges and it moved lazily, sometimes hither sometimes thither, like a man with no particular deadline to meet. It moved, melanizing the floor along its path. And as it moved further, it broke off into two parallel streams. The streams seemed to look longingly at each other like they never wished to be separated. They never imagined that they could even have a separate existence. They had never bothered to make one out from the other. Even the floor seemed to cry for them and the tears seemed to be the streams themselves.
But then something happened. Maybe it was the wind. Maybe a slight slope. Or maybe, just maybe it was their longing. They were no longer parallel. They meandered towards each other.And as they neared, one stream for once showed a sense of urgency. The other reciprocated and the next second they moved along lazily again, as one. Again as two bodies, one soul. A sweet pang in my chest. The nature seemed to smile at the stream. The Sun shined ever so mildly, not wanting to dry them off and the floor did his best by nudging them through a slope as if sending them for a honeymoon.

10 comments:

PriPat said...

Surely u have an extraordinary ablity to depect human nature

cool stuff keep it up

Anonymous said...

You are a die-hard romantic trying to find emotions out of ordinary events, aren't you?. Too bad, it is just so typical filmi-style, within nothing new to tell. If small girl playing with a ball and an old man watering the pants depict all what you said, then all I can say is that you have a reason to complain I am hypocritic. You would never get me!!

P.S: Please read something about surface tension of liquids and find the actual reason why water in a stream fuse together.

Thanks
rizi

Sujith said...

i normally don't reply to comments. but then there are some people who force me to do the abnormal. So you get the credit for that.
rizi! dude!
the post was not meant for the prosaics and the bitter hearted ones.
so your comment at the first place was not warranted here.
take off the bitterness. learn to appreciate good stuff and you are welcome back here again.
well, i do care about the comments and about what people think about what i write. But i also care about the kind of people who come here.
The post was inspired:
1) by an incident which i witnessed first hand. i don't think too many people would have taken enough pains to think of two branches of a stream as two lovers. im sorry to know that you dint even take the pain to comprehend.
2) 2 days after i wrote this post, i saw a biography of a great tamil poet and while talking about his poems, one of the singers who sang for his poems broke down while talking about the ingenuity of the poet who compared teardrops to two lovers.
Just the first time i felt good about my post. So i wouldnt care whatever the world says because im happy at my own creation. Thank you.
Any further bitter hearted comments may be deleted from here. Any creative, constructive comments, you are all too welcome.
P.S: me thinks a Mechanical Engineer would be more at ease talking about surface tensions than an IT or a Computer guy. so there...

Sujith said...

yeah! btw, the old man was not watering the pants. The guy is not old enough to do all that.
He, once we read the post keeping aside all the bitterness, was watering the plants with his PVC pipe.
Thank you.

Anonymous said...

Hey, it's "me" I think you know who I am. I learned a lot about you from reading that, and I think that you're extremely intelligent, creative, sensitive, and just a great person. This is totally cheesy, but I've never heard you speak like that before (or at all for that matter lol, but that was amazing! Just like you lol. Signed..your friend. ;)

Ramya Shankar said...

Haven't been here for quite a while. But am damn happy to find such lovely posts awaiting me. Subtle nature. Beautiful.

Anonymous said...

:) :) great going! well written with just the right words. quite imaginative must say. dont bother about others. all genuises were once declared mad!

have fun and keep blogging!

Tina

Num said...

Sensitive,well written observation,a tad too cliched near the end though?
Great job.Don't let the comments get you down.
Surface tension is fine
but some people take technicality too far.
Bah.
Take a moment.You might just find there is more to life than molecules and biochemical hocus-pocus.

sowmitra said...

that was truly something...looking at everything differently..unique.....i loved it..the way u look at simple things of life is grt...u must try to become a poet or maybe u are already...grt going

Anonymous said...

hi...well iam reading ur blog for the very first time, but i must confess that it was quite an experience...very subtle insinuations and simplictiy of this post really deserves some appreciation...moreover, its one of those 'spending time with urself moments' so undoubtedly its worth capturing.....btw...which coffee were u having....cheers man!!!!
P.S: try beer next time, i think it wud work wonders for u..



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